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Organization should contain:
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Do you see this?
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a beginning which makes the reader want to keep reading
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yes or no
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How could you improve it?
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connected ideas
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yes or no
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An example:
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transition words
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yes or no
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Examples:
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Details which add a little more to the main idea or story
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yes or no
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one idea per paragraph
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yes or no
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An example:
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a title, if desired, which is original
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yes or no
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How could you improve it
(or what could it be)?
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an ending which is satisfying and gives the reader something to think
about
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yes or no
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How could you improve it?
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